As I'm reading through your paragraphs from yesterday's class, most of them are quite good. I thought I would share a thesis that not only clearly states what analytical points the author is going to focus on but also incorporates a bit of humor as well.
Between Strong Bad's evil look with glares as his eyeballs to his fists out ready throw a punch, even though the picture is in black and white, you know that he is one butt-kicking badass.
For those of you revising your paragraphs, I apologize that I can't find the an identical image of the one I presented in class, but here's the best I could come up with.
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