Sample Essay Sentences

At the main blog, under "Class Assignments", you can find some student-written examples of both poor and acceptable sentences for the "Academic Integrity" sample essay. Many of you had sentences that were very general, and one key thing I was looking for was if each sentence, whether the thesis or each topic sentence, encompassed everything that was mentioned in each section. Read through the examples (and keep in mind I said the examples were acceptable, not fabulous!), and see how your sentences compared.